Hi my name is jeff you should come to my planet katana. no need to buy a house because its free for a house and when you breath in you collect food and water from the sky. there is this fun game called floyf and you have to get a golf club and shot it in a goal.i hope you like the free houses and games with the food and water:). so come to katana.
Wednesday, September 15, 2021
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Kia ora Lucas, I really like the way you settled into your work and you wrote a very persuasive story to get Jeff to visit Katana! I liked the reasons your thought of especially the free houses! I think I would like to visit Katana too. Don't forget to use paragraphs - that will help set out your story a bit better.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the great work!